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It's hard to make a slender knothole,
If given a cord too thick.
It's hard to craft a dainty dollhouse,
If given a pyramid brick.
It's hard to make a flying machine,
If given the smallest of birds.
It's hard to lift a Broken-Heart,
Without the right words.
If given a cord too thick.
It's hard to craft a dainty dollhouse,
If given a pyramid brick.
It's hard to make a flying machine,
If given the smallest of birds.
It's hard to lift a Broken-Heart,
Without the right words.
This is the first time I've rhymed in ages. I only wrote it yesterday, so I haven't really formed an opinion on it yet, but I kind of like it. It could probably use a revision here and there, but as the basic shell, it's pretty nifty.
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I like this a lot. I especially like "It's hard to craft a dainty dollhouse,If given a pyramid brick," beacuse of the imagery it creates. The only thing would be to maybe change "lift" to "fix" or "mend"? Anyway, I like this a lot
